May l0th Monday Cloudy
This afternoon my school held an English-speaking contest named"Challenging the Future" in the multi-function classroom. The students who are excellent at English took part in the contest. I just went there as an audience.
I got a lot from their speech. In their speech, I found all of them had made full use of the present time and conditions to prepare for the future and used the known factors to challenge the unknown ones. From this I realized that we shouldn't waste our time of today and shouldn't put today's work off to tomorrow. Today is the base of tomorrow. I will no longer waste my present time. I am going to study hard and do good preparation for my future.
Dear leader,
I am very glad that your school will hold the English Summer Camp that contains many courses ,such as gardening 、 cooking 、 self-defence 、 nursing and so on 。I want to register to attend a course bout gardening ,because I have liked flowers 、grasses etc since I was a little child。I especially like playing in the garden where I can enjoy the beauty of nature。For one thing ,I hope to gain a bit more knowledge of gardening so that it can help me to major in the gardening after attending college。Besides I wish to get much more information about gardening so as to study it more easily when I enter the university。What''s more ,I can realize the bitterness of the gardeners to treasure the plants much more。For another,after graduation from college I will devote my life to cultivate the flowers and grasses to turn our country into a more beautiful state and make many more foreigners come to visit our country 。
Yours,
Wang yue hua
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2. 第二段为正文,共七句。第三句为主题句,提出本段的主题,它应与第一段的主题相关或一致。第四至九句为扩展句,说明和支持本段的主题。句与句之间要注意好过渡,以使段落逻辑合理,结构得当。
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